haiku

Na književnom konkursu haiku pesnika na temu “Gavran” pohvala za moj haiku.

otvoren prozor
nad šumom krik gavrana
i moja tuga

open window
above the forest a raven”s cry
and my sorrow

https://czkidn.hr/results-of-a-raven-haiku-contest-rezultati-haiku-natjecaja-na-temu-gavran/?fbclid=IwAR011EkhFU2RM-dWhrZL7J3fyc2V_xm__79oN39eOPLCkdYQeiJtG03VDNA

10 komentara za "haiku"

  1. Marija
    Marija
    10/06/2021 at 6:30 am Permalink

    Bravo, Mile! Vrlo lijep haiku morao je naći odjek! 🙂

  2. Mihaela
    Mihaela
    10/06/2021 at 6:36 am Permalink

    Čestitam, Mile. Tvoji su haikui neodoljivi! 🙂

  3. Tonka
    Tonka
    10/06/2021 at 7:43 am Permalink

    Čestitam!

  4. AnjaL
    10/06/2021 at 10:53 am Permalink

    Čestitam!

  5. Mile Lisica
    Mile Lisica
    10/06/2021 at 3:46 pm Permalink

    Hvala Marija,lp

  6. Mile Lisica
    Mile Lisica
    10/06/2021 at 3:47 pm Permalink

    Hvala Mihaela
    lp

  7. Mile Lisica
    Mile Lisica
    10/06/2021 at 3:47 pm Permalink

    Hvala Tonka
    lp

  8. Mile Lisica
    Mile Lisica
    10/06/2021 at 3:47 pm Permalink

    Hvala Anja
    lp

  9. katarinab
    katarinab
    10/06/2021 at 7:11 pm Permalink

    Čestitam, Mile! Vrlo lijep haiku.
    Veliki pozdrav. 🙂

  10. boba grljusic
    boba grljusic
    11/06/2021 at 5:39 am Permalink

    Pridružujem se čestitkama,bravo.

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